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July 1st, 1916

July 24, 2024 7 Comments

By Kevin Owen

It’s the molten poker of agony lancing through his mangled guts. It’s the shivering gasps, lungs gargling in a froth of blood. It’s the reek of bowels voided on the entrail-laden wind. His numb fingers fumble for a cross in some corner of a faecal field.

He remembers that fleeting smile, a sunbeam glimpse, that said she was the one. It’s her sunny cottage garden overflowing with nodding blooms. It’s her white bed sheets hanging, gently flapping on the breeze. Her soft rose-petal lips that he’ll never tenderly kiss. And that Bluebird’s bright blue feathers and song he will never hear.

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  1. David Higham says

    July 24, 2024 at 6:33 am

    Lyrical.

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  2. Tim Goldstone says

    July 24, 2024 at 6:40 am

    Almost like a Wilfred Owen poem.

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  3. Ramona Taylor says

    July 24, 2024 at 11:18 am

    Very vivid imagery. Cost of war. Poignant

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  4. Dan Graves says

    July 24, 2024 at 7:55 pm

    Wilfred Owen was my first thought, too.

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  5. Ilona Rapin says

    July 25, 2024 at 10:34 am

    Great piece – esp the first paragraph.

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  6. Charlotte Bennardo says

    July 25, 2024 at 5:47 pm

    horror, yet beauty.

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  7. Miera says

    July 29, 2024 at 3:00 pm

    Heartbreakingly beautiful.

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