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Just This

November 21, 2018 4 Comments

Just This

By Nuthara Karunarathna

“Just this,” her coach promised, holding her at arm’s length. “You have to win just this.”

He said, “I want you both to win. Make me proud.”

It was at times like this that her fear for him surfaced, when she remembered his hand raised to strike her. She swallowed, and set off with her brother.

Then they announced the pairings for the games.

Thunder crashed in her ears.

She would be playing with her brother, and it didn’t matter who won. One would have failed him, and he would blame both for it.

She could already feel him hitting her.

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  1. cascondaville says

    November 21, 2018 at 7:55 am

    Oh, this is heartbreaking!

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  2. Akindu Perera says

    November 22, 2018 at 10:06 am

    This is a classic 10/10.

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  3. Mary E Falkner says

    November 23, 2018 at 7:05 pm

    Agree, 10/10.

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  4. Iqbal Hussain says

    November 24, 2018 at 7:08 am

    oh goodness, what a horrible dilemma! nicely told.

    Reply

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