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Just to Be Sure

May 17, 2018 10 Comments

Just to Be Sure

By Prabhu Gowda

His middle name is despair, the rest is Joe Lunchbucket. Dark clouds hover over him everywhere, whispering him to never go astray. Silver linings elude these clouds, like hope eluding him. His decrepit apartment’s smeared ceiling knows him better than his emotionally absent mother and runaway father combined.

Stumbling mailman with misaddressed Christmas card cut his noose loose last winter. Dark clouds stayed the spring, hovering over him. Summer’s here; he won’t go to the beach. He cuts the power-line, latches windows, and contemplates the noose. It beckons. It’s neither winter, nor Christmas. He bolts the door, just to be sure.

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  1. Prathibha says

    May 17, 2018 at 2:26 am

    ??

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  2. Susan says

    May 17, 2018 at 9:41 am

    A sad, moving story. Was it depression or something else?
    I liked the name Joe Lunch bucket, just an average guy going to work each day. From, what I’ve read, it’s his group, the out-of-work members of it, that has the highest suicide rate in United States.

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    • Prabhu says

      May 17, 2018 at 11:41 am

      Thank you, Susan. It’s depression. More than that, it’s coming to terms that it’ll never get better. It’s the average Joes like you said, who often succumb to it. Sad, indeed.

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      • Puttur Anantharaja Gowda says

        May 25, 2018 at 1:37 am

        Sad indeed.

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  3. rauthor68 says

    May 17, 2018 at 11:05 am

    Decisions leave us breathless. Good job.

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    • Prabhu says

      May 17, 2018 at 11:42 am

      Thank you, rauthor68!

      Reply
  4. C says

    May 17, 2018 at 3:01 pm

    Fabulously written, with a powerful, poignant ending. Well done.

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    • Prabhu says

      May 17, 2018 at 3:22 pm

      Thank you, C.

      Reply
  5. Derek McMillan says

    May 17, 2018 at 6:32 pm

    Suicide is the most transgressive act there is. This story makes it a bit easier to understand.

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    • Prabhu says

      May 18, 2018 at 7:37 am

      I’ll take it as a compliment, Derek. Thank you.

      Reply

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