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Justifiable

September 22, 2015 2 Comments

Justifiable

By Levi J. Mericle

Her scream dissipated in a mere second, like my warm breath against the frigid windshield.

I could see her cell phone blinking like a beacon for help as I staggered from my vehicle and rushed to the smoldering wreckage. The rain was thick as I pried the door open, pulling her mangled body out and onto my lap.

Our tears mixed, chilled in the eye of the torrential storm.

That was my birthday. The day I blew out my candles. The day I drank one too many, and the day she died in my arms.

How can I justify her existence?

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  1. Cat says

    September 25, 2015 at 9:36 am

    I wanted to read more…!

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  2. Sue says

    October 7, 2015 at 11:04 am

    This is mysterious, elegantly written in so few words. I’d like the beginning! And the end! I guess like Cat, I’d like to read more.

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