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Juvenile Trauma

March 26, 2016 5 Comments

Juvenile Trauma

By Janice Cutbush

In eighth grade I decided I would become ‘cool’ if I had a pixie haircut like Mia Farrow’s. Except she was a blonde, small-nosed American and I was brunette and Italian. My mother took me to our hairdresser, Mr. Vito, in Schenectady. I told him what I wanted.

He nodded. “Si.” I watched as he chopped my long, dark, wavy hair.

To console me my mother took me to lunch.

“Why don’t you like it?”

“It makes my nose look huge!” I sobbed.

It would take many more mistakes before I stopped trying to change myself and accepted my Italian-American identity.

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  1. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    March 26, 2016 at 9:12 am

    Liked your use of language and the moral ending.

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  2. Scott Merrow says

    March 26, 2016 at 9:38 am

    It’s true, the grass is always greener. Nice story.

    Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 26, 2016 at 10:18 am

    A not so subtle reminder that we are hardly ever satisfied with our own looks. Good job.

    Reply
  4. majokmindfuleating says

    March 26, 2016 at 12:41 pm

    Trying to picture you with that haircut. Great story

    Reply
  5. Leslie Sittner says

    March 26, 2016 at 2:43 pm

    You always look great to A.L.L. of us! Nice job.

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