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Katie

March 29, 2016 5 Comments

Katie

By Daniela Maestres

She said her name was Katie and that she was a nanny. Her hip bones showed from underneath her turquoise dress. She had opinions about everything. Sometimes I’d realize they weren’t completely related to the conversation; she just made them sound like they were.

We shared Indonesian desserts, and I told her about my neighbor who makes ketamine cookies. “My kind of guy,” she said.

She left with my wallet. Used my credit card nine times. She sent me an email the next morning—said she’d found the address on my business card—and asked me to meet her for coffee.

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  1. Anna Sanderson says

    March 29, 2016 at 9:45 am

    Katie is a really intriguing character. This makes me want to read more about her!

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  2. Smila W. Planete says

    March 29, 2016 at 2:33 pm

    Yeah, I really enjoyed your description of Katie. And I also approve of how you didn’t simply leave it at… “she left with my wallet” Nicely written.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 29, 2016 at 5:18 pm

    Glad you left this one open-ended. How about a sequel? I’m sure you could come up with a series of interesting stories about Katie. (Hint, hint.)

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  4. Jo Patterson says

    March 29, 2016 at 7:15 pm

    Was she met for coffee?

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  5. John La Briola says

    March 31, 2016 at 6:46 am

    Great piece, great tone, great eye for detail.

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