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Kids

April 29, 2016 5 Comments

Kids

By Christopher Dehon

Days after he stopped calling my name from outside the bathroom, and days before he’d started locking his door, playing the music loud so he couldn’t hear me, but before the money started going missing, I was singing with him in the car. He traced my hand with his finger, and looked closely at it like he was trying to memorize it.

Now I’m at a memorial full of people who didn’t know him. Kids who lied to me when I tried to find him. I pictured telling the car story. I couldn’t. No one here was old enough to understand.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    April 29, 2016 at 9:20 am

    Though this is about kids, it holds exceptional perception and awareness on their parts. A tale VERY WELL told.

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  2. dbpela says

    April 29, 2016 at 9:28 am

    Very powerful and heartbreaking.

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  3. Paul Alex Gray (@paulalexgray) says

    April 29, 2016 at 10:28 am

    Wow, this one hits hard. The tracing of the hand is beautiful.

    Reply
  4. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    April 29, 2016 at 5:47 pm

    Very profound and well written.

    Reply
  5. Deepak says

    April 29, 2016 at 6:41 pm

    Fab.

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