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Knight to F3

January 30, 2018 6 Comments

Knight to F3

By Kim McGreal

Caroline gripped the ivory piece in her hand and felt a surge of jealousy. This chess piece could simply ignore the same path everyone else took. It could slip diagonally between the patterns, like a child colouring outside the lines to design their own picture.

They’d always told her she was a prodigy, but her life felt more like that of a pawn than a bishop—forever following the path her parents set, with no choices of her own.

But at four years old, who didn’t?

She popped her lollipop back in her mouth and made the move: knight to F3.

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  1. Meghashri says

    January 30, 2018 at 8:51 pm

    A-m-a-z-i-n-g!

    Reply
    • Kim says

      January 31, 2018 at 11:17 am

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  2. glkamens says

    January 31, 2018 at 10:13 am

    Gedult’s Opening, then Barnes? Classic move! Jerry

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    • Kim says

      January 31, 2018 at 12:59 pm

      Thank you!

      Reply
  3. gemspegasus says

    February 3, 2018 at 11:30 pm

    Wonderful flash fiction. I enjoy how you compare her feelings to the game she was playing.

    Reply
    • Kim says

      February 6, 2018 at 2:17 pm

      Thanks Angela!

      Reply

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