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Knots That Matter

June 27, 2018 11 Comments

Knots That Matter

By Delvon T. Mattingly

The worst part about dressing up is tying the tie. Repeatedly trying to craft the perfect knot, all the longer I have to stare at myself.

She often gets ready beside me, and I wonder what she sees in me. I can never get the knot right, always trapped in the heart of a standoff; a game of tug-of-war played by my mind—the optic nerves of my eyes used as ropes. Stuck between gazing into her beauty unnoticed and avoiding my reflection.

Our eyes lock in the mirror.

โ€œCute!โ€ She smiles, nodding at my tie.

Yep, Iโ€™ll keep this knot.

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  1. rauthor68 says

    June 27, 2018 at 8:42 am

    Forever love cannot be untied, but withstands the true test of time, but 20/20 vision helps, too.

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  2. Susan says

    June 27, 2018 at 4:26 pm

    Perfectionism hurts!

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    • delvonmattingly says

      June 28, 2018 at 12:17 pm

      Indeed!

      Reply
  3. Shoshauna says

    June 28, 2018 at 12:11 pm

    Terrific story! In so few well-chosen words, I know both of these characters, and care about them. Kudos;

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    • delvonmattingly says

      June 28, 2018 at 12:18 pm

      Thank you so much!

      Reply
  4. Mary E Falkner says

    June 28, 2018 at 6:59 pm

    Very very good.

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    • Delvon T. Mattingly says

      June 30, 2018 at 2:14 pm

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  5. Endless Edits says

    July 1, 2018 at 7:12 am

    Great story. I love the play between the different types of knots. Well done!

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    • Delvon T. Mattingly says

      July 1, 2018 at 3:55 pm

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

      Reply
  6. Bobby Warner says

    July 2, 2018 at 12:43 pm

    Wonderful, touching, perceptive. Nice little comment on the “knots that bind.” Loved it.

    Reply
    • Delvon T. Mattingly says

      July 4, 2018 at 3:11 pm

      I’m glad you enjoyed the read!

      Reply

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