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Lamentation’s Echo

February 18, 2016 4 Comments

Lamentation’s Echo

By Triantafyllia Kaimakami

Fallen yellow leaves swirl about as the train approaches the station. I’m the only one waiting to board, which is unusual for a Tuesday morning. But it means I find a seat easily, in the first carriage I reach.

I browse the newspaper: ‘Refugee bodies wash up on Lesbos Beach, including 7 children.’

A crying baby sounds; I lift my eyes to look, and wonder if crying sounds the same when babies struggle in stormy seas.

What is the lullaby of their seabed; does mourning resound in the frozen waves.

The ticket collector interrupts my thoughts.

“May I check your ticket, sir?”

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  1. Simon says

    February 18, 2016 at 11:52 am

    Well done. Forces us to look at our safe life in the context of other’s tragedies.

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  2. Mind Reader says

    February 18, 2016 at 3:01 pm

    Nice story, very touching…

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    February 18, 2016 at 4:53 pm

    Well-written and very thought-provoking. A winner.

    Reply
  4. Sara says

    February 20, 2016 at 6:41 am

    Sad, touching and beautiful. Was the italicized line a question? It sounded like one but wasn’t punctuated like one. That confused me. Otherwise, it was a well done piece!

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