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Last Call

September 4, 2019 3 Comments

Last Call

By Raymond Sloan

He sat amongst the lunchtime murmur, forgetting the funeral—thinking of the friends that used to surround him, the times. Clutching his cold one. He scanned the room between sips, noticing he hardly recognized the place anymore. It was bigger than he thought. More than one TV on the walls. Served cocktails, pushed gin sales, menu-listed mocktails.

He drained his pint until all that was left was a frothy bottom, then left like he had been waiting all along in the wrong room and went home to his wife. She popped on the kettle upon his arrival, setting up his usual.

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  1. Don Tassone says

    September 4, 2019 at 7:06 am

    The unfamiliar and the familiar, both part of the last call. Great story.

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  2. Karisa Moore says

    September 5, 2019 at 8:36 am

    It is amazing how our narrow world is both expanded and refocused by every changing experience. I wasn’t sure how the funeral fit. Did he lose a friend? I like the contrast between what used to be his norm, and his new “usual” with his wife.

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  3. Mary E Falkner says

    September 7, 2019 at 5:53 pm

    I took this as the epitome of dreary failure, poor man.

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