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Last Car Ride

August 7, 2017 5 Comments

Last Car Ride

By Gerald Kamens

Sunday, my 88-year-old father-in-law seemed at death’s door. At the nursing home, Curtis fell in and out of consciousness. Susan, my wife and a nurse, spoke later of last-stage physical movements, and time to say good-byes.

By Thursday, Curtis appeared more his old self. This had happened before. To my surprise, he agreed to a ride. Without his wife and daughter. Just us men. With difficulty, I got him into the car. We traveled down the wooded roads for fifteen minutes.

When I asked him afterwards what the best part of the drive was, he whispered to my wife, “the driver.”

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  1. Jack Spies says

    August 7, 2017 at 8:23 am

    Good story and observation of the staying power of seniors.

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  2. Mariela Devoto says

    August 7, 2017 at 8:48 pm

    Excellent in every respect!

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  3. Kathy Duby says

    August 7, 2017 at 11:41 pm

    Such a concentrated depiction of a great family. That last ride seemed symbolic but his punchline said he had more love to give.

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  4. Anita Bodle says

    August 8, 2017 at 4:38 pm

    Poignant, beautiful story.

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  5. Dave MacMillan says

    August 13, 2017 at 8:09 pm

    Thanks for this. I appreciate the sense of mortality in all three of these stories. Since my son’s wedding in May in Santa Fe I came home for the first time for the sense of my own mortality. Good work

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