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Last of Light

September 25, 2015 5 Comments

Last of Light

By Pattyann McCarthy

I watch the fireflies cling to life as the end of summer approaches, the days turning cooler, nights chilly.

Some say the end is near for humanity. If it’s true, I wonder what that will be like.

I keep watch at night for the brilliance of the fireflies twinkling in the treetops. I see only one. Is it the last? It falls to the ground; its light barely sparks on the way down. Lying in the grass, the firefly’s light dimly flickers, its flame extinguishing with its life.

I fear that will be us, fighting to survive as our light dies.

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  1. clayfulghum says

    September 25, 2015 at 10:49 am

    A beautiful–and appropriate–analogy.

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  2. Pattyann McCarthy says

    September 25, 2015 at 2:08 pm

    Thank you so much, Clay. You’re very kind.

    Reply
  3. exiledprospero says

    September 25, 2015 at 5:05 pm

    A well-wrought metaphor, Pattyann. Hopefully not too prophetic though, but that’s the enduring power of great science fiction writing.

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    • Pattyann McCarthy says

      September 30, 2015 at 1:01 pm

      Thanks so much, Prospero. Hoping myself it’s not prophetic, but one can’t help but to wonder! 🙂

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  4. Naomi says

    October 18, 2015 at 1:04 pm

    That last singing cricket holds the same emotions for me. (I wrote a poem about it.) I love this!

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