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Late

February 29, 2024 6 Comments

By Hugh Cartwright

So many deaths.

With blue lights flashing, we race downtown. She’s easy to find, lying motionless on the frozen pavement. “Just sixteen,” someone says. Her glazed eyes stare into mine, but I know that they see nothing; the antidote in our bags cannot save her.

I hold her hand, and suddenly my mind is filled with futures destroyed. She might have been a musician, an athlete, or found joy in simply being alive. She might have been a wife, mother, and grandmother, for God’s sake.

But all possibilities died tonight. Her future has collapsed to a single data point: another statistic.

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  1. Dart humeston says

    February 29, 2024 at 7:29 am

    Powerful.

    Reply
  2. Pat R. says

    March 6, 2024 at 10:55 am

    Sadly very timely. Poignant and empathetic. I enjoyed this. It really moved me.

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    • Hugh says

      March 6, 2024 at 4:58 pm

      Thank you Pat. It is indeed depressing that writing about such a topic could be described as timely.

      Reply
  3. Paul Scott Wood says

    March 6, 2024 at 10:56 am

    Such a sad commentary about life lost too young.

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  4. Bud says

    March 6, 2024 at 2:02 pm

    An emotional story very well told.

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    • Hugh says

      March 6, 2024 at 4:52 pm

      Thank you for your comment. I find it harder to write about serious topics than about more light-hearted ones, so it is good to know that this piece worked for you.

      Reply

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