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Legacy

February 6, 2016 4 Comments

Legacy

By Krystyna Fedosejevs

Ambitious researcher. Fifty years old. Close to breakthrough.

Pockmarks on my face from severe acne fueled his goal to make me presentable. Perfect a cosmetic cream.

He worked within the dimensions of a large walk-in closet. Miniature chemistry lab: watch glasses illuminated with various pigments, flasks and beakers precariously placed between tubing. I nodded approvingly as he gave me a tour.

When the church door opened across the street and people entered, I crouched behind a hedge. I would’ve paid my respects had it not been for my condition.

Fumes from the last experiment killed him. Sulfur had burnt my face.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    February 6, 2016 at 9:08 am

    Bitter-sweet tale of an accidental “monster.” Nice job.

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  2. tskraghu says

    February 6, 2016 at 9:09 am

    Amazing imagination:-)

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  3. Jayne says

    February 6, 2016 at 12:59 pm

    I like the way you’ve presented the vanity of both characters in such a short space. Good job.

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  4. Krystyna Fedosejevs says

    February 7, 2016 at 6:51 am

    Thank you Bobby, tskraghu and Jayne for reading. I appreciate your comments.

    Reply

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