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Letting Go

May 8, 2020 7 Comments

Letting go

By Richard Teague

She looked into my eyes, close enough to see her own reflection there, relaxed her grip on my arm, her gentle breath mingled with my stridor, like a requiem, then she kissed me.

The bedroom was turning grey, the music too started to fade, the end wasn’t so unpleasant, I thought. Now my peripheral vision shrank until I could only see her face, close to mine, a final look, a smile, soft like a lover’s.

“It’s easy, just let go,” she whispered. Her breath carried the smell of freshly turned earth.

She moved away, replaced the syringe on the bedside table.

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  1. Maltesha says

    May 8, 2020 at 4:12 am

    Let go of the wind you’re holding in

    To meet with your doom

    And make them let go of theirs

    To clear a crowded room

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    • stella murovic says

      May 8, 2020 at 9:22 am

      love this Maltesha – few words but well chosen – Stella

      Reply
  2. Cathy Cade says

    May 8, 2020 at 9:46 am

    I want the backstory!

    Reply
  3. Kristoffer Poll says

    May 8, 2020 at 10:55 am

    Woe.

    Reply
  4. Siobhan Wright says

    May 8, 2020 at 2:51 pm

    This is a grim story but a well-executed one. The form seems to lend itself to a surprise ending. Nice job.

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  5. Stella Klein says

    May 8, 2020 at 3:25 pm

    I want backstory too but will imagine it for myself! 🙂

    Reply
  6. Ifinedo Anastasia says

    May 10, 2020 at 9:03 am

    This story got me really curious. What’s the significance of that syringe?

    Reply

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