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Lewy’s Body

December 11, 2020 10 Comments

By Brandy Brow

Every day is a new game. Today, I must choose the real bedroom.

The sparse one beckons—nothing confusing—but the other’s ugly bedspread makes me pause. Objects indicate occupancy; that this bedroom’s real. I frown. I don’t want it.

“Help!” I call.

A woman comes. Her face isn’t familiar, but I feel we’re connected, important to each other somehow. Suddenly my mind clicks and I’m the most myself I’ve been in forever. I know her. Then I remember. I’m transient.

I grasp her arm. “You must understand,” I blurt before I vanish again into no one. “Sometimes I know you.”

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Comments

  1. David Daniel says

    December 11, 2020 at 8:15 am

    This is a sweetly/maddeningly taunting/haunting story. Bravo.

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  2. Bonnie Meekums says

    December 11, 2020 at 8:47 am

    This is very poignant, given the title of the story.

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  3. Cathy Cade says

    December 11, 2020 at 3:16 pm

    It may not have been intended, but that sounds very like Alzheimers. Well described.

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    • Brandy Brow says

      December 11, 2020 at 9:12 pm

      Very much indeed. Thank you.

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      • Cathy Cade says

        December 12, 2020 at 6:45 am

        I hadn’t heard of Lewy Body Dementia until your story, so I didn’t have the title as a clue – just your description.

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        • Brandy Brow says

          December 12, 2020 at 3:05 pm

          I’m glad my story raises some awareness about LBD and that you were able to get the gist of the story without knowing about it. Thank you very much for commenting.

          Reply
  4. Katie Briggs says

    December 11, 2020 at 5:01 pm

    Super good!

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  5. Andrea says

    December 11, 2020 at 8:25 pm

    Oh full of beauty, of pain and of
    Lewy truth.

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  6. Brandy Brow says

    December 11, 2020 at 9:11 pm

    Thank you very much, everyone. I took care of a family member who was afflicted by Lewy Body Dementia. This story is the result of a dream I had where I was the one with dementia. It helped me understand what it was like for my loved one.

    Reply
  7. K says

    December 16, 2020 at 9:20 am

    Masterful, terribly sweet and sad. Thank you.

    Reply

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