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Liatta’s Dream

March 22, 2017 2 Comments

Liatta’s Dream

By Jeffrey A. Paolano

Liatta’s latest mania prompts her father’s question. “Anything on Saturday?” Pelch hopefully inquires.

“No, sheet’s bare.”

“Shit.” His response is laden with disenchantment.

Arriving home Pelch grumbles a greeting to Arlene, “Hello, honey, no overtime. I’ll just go to Manpower Saturday.”

“Oh, you’ll miss our family day,” responds a downcast Arlene, hands adrip.

An innocent Liatta joins the two in preparing the family’s dinner.

“Mom, can we go look at clarinets on Saturday?”

“Yes, dear.” The parents cast a furtive bright-eyed glance.

Pelch smiles expansively as does his wife, lighting their burden’s dulling grey, a light brightening the drudge of Saturday.

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  1. Roseline Glazer says

    March 22, 2017 at 9:27 am

    I love the mood the writer creates in only 101 words. The caring father was going to look for temp work on a Saturday. Instead the parents will indulge their daughter with a musical instrument.
    Their bond reverberates.

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  2. Dante Murray says

    March 22, 2017 at 11:02 am

    A sweet well crafted story.

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