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Lights Out

March 7, 2016 5 Comments

Lights Out

By DeRicki Johnson

“Cheryl from accounting, right?” the man in expensive but dirty camo asked, as he grasped the piece of moldering summer sausage he’d just dug from the ruins of a Walmart.

It was now one year since the asteroid strike had destroyed civilization…lights out. All the food was gone.

His former coworker watched in sullen silence. She wore scuffed red Pradas.

The man’s hand edged toward his Bowie knife. His crafty, desperate smile faded as the others drifted from the shadows, skeletal wraiths. They fell on him like ravening wolves.

She stared as they dressed him for meat. “Name’s Sandra, asshat.”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 7, 2016 at 9:21 am

    Another clever twist ending. Liked the gritty realism of this tale. It’s a Winner!

    Reply
    • DeRicki Johnson says

      March 7, 2016 at 7:10 pm

      Thanks for the feedback Bobby. I’m glad you enjoyed!

      Reply
  2. John La Briola says

    March 7, 2016 at 9:53 am

    Yikes! Guess name tags are optional in the dystopian future, eh?

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    • DeRicki Johnson says

      March 7, 2016 at 7:13 pm

      Haha! The importance of avoiding social gaffs seems to have racheted up a notch or two…??

      Reply
  3. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 8, 2016 at 4:55 am

    From normal to nuts in no time flat. Great piece.

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