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Long Night Love

July 6, 2015 7 Comments

Long Night Love

By Tina LeCount Myers

I never imagined it would end like this.

NoNoNoNoNoNo. I was in love.

I lifted my hands from Kyle’s body. I shook, ice filling the marrow of my bones. The night dripped thick and hot, making me fight for what little oxygen remained.

I gulped for air, then lurched forward. My hands hit the still steaming asphalt as my stomach churned up Southern Comfort and mandarin chicken. I sat back, road-grit burrowing into my bare knees like starving ticks.

A bird voice in my brain screamed, Run! But I just kneeled there, jelly-legged, staring as my vomit mixed with Kyle’s blood.

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  1. Pattyann McCarthy says

    July 6, 2015 at 9:17 am

    Great imagery here, Tina. Nice work!

    Reply
    • Tina Myers says

      July 6, 2015 at 2:53 pm

      Thanks Pattyann!

      Reply
  2. Pattyann McCarthy says

    July 6, 2015 at 9:17 am

    Nice imagery here, Tina. Great work!

    Reply
  3. Jenny Taft says

    July 7, 2015 at 5:57 am

    This is so gripping! Well done ????

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    • Tina Myers says

      July 12, 2015 at 5:37 am

      Thanks Jenny!

      Reply
  4. Jenny Taft says

    July 7, 2015 at 5:58 am

    Not meant to be ???but !!!

    Reply
  5. Tina Myers says

    July 12, 2015 at 5:38 am

    !!! ????

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