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Long Odds

March 4, 2016 4 Comments

Long Odds

By John La Briola

A grey-haired gambler allergic to horses lays 30-1 in the ninth, sneezes and swears his way through a nail-biter, swings by a drugstore going home for something to soothe his symptoms.

“Lookin’ like a winner, Murph’,” cracks Cassandra, an emphysemic cashier pulling graveyard. “Your watery eyes never lie.”

“And your watery mouth never looked tastier, Cupcake. Got any Calamine lotion? Industrial strength?”

“Celebratin’?”

They share a smoky laugh in twilight’s brown, fluorescent hum.

He fingers the bumps on his anvil-like brow. Hits his inhaler. Loosens his tie. Shrugs. Smiles.

“Don’t gimme that look, Cass’. You know I’m no good pickin’ dogs.”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 4, 2016 at 11:31 am

    A wonderful story, John! Had no trouble at all “seeing this one clearly in my mind’s eye.” That’s the mark of a good writer.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      March 4, 2016 at 11:34 pm

      Thanks for the kind words and contined support, Bobby.

      Reply
  2. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    March 4, 2016 at 6:21 pm

    This was written well. The visualization excellent. Nice work.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      March 4, 2016 at 11:36 pm

      I appreciate your comment, Lisa. Thanks.

      Reply

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