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Longshot

July 16, 2020 10 Comments

Longshot

By Steve Lodge

In the year after the Victorian virus ended, Londoners embraced the freedom, but an explosion of crime kept Scotland Yard and many private detectives extremely busy.

The legend on the door read Longshot Investigations. Robert Dare.

Professor Steelogian, the famed private detective, knocked with his cane.

He was led through to where Dare and Inspector Illingworth were seated either side of a desk.

“You’re slipping, Professor,” smiled Illingworth. “Dare caught both Ralston, the Bethnal Green axe murderer and Moribund, the Limehouse human meat seller.”

“But the Silvertown Slasher still eludes you, mon ami?”

“No,” said Dare. “I know it is you.”

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  1. Jacqui Ward says

    July 16, 2020 at 5:01 am

    Another great piece of writing by this author. He effectively sets the scene and still has time for an unexpected gem at the end. Really enjoyed this. More please.

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    • Steve says

      July 16, 2020 at 7:47 pm

      Thank you so much for your kind comments, Jacqui. I’m delighted you enjoyed it. Please stay safe

      Reply
  2. xaviercombe@sfr.fr says

    July 16, 2020 at 8:53 am

    Shortest crime story I’ve ever read! Background, characters, final twist. Yes indeed, more please.

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    • Steve says

      July 16, 2020 at 7:50 pm

      Really appreciated your kind comments, Xavier. Many thanks. Please stay safe.

      Reply
  3. derekmcmillan1951 says

    July 16, 2020 at 10:48 am

    This story packs a lot into a few words. I enjoyed reading it.

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    • Steve says

      July 16, 2020 at 7:52 pm

      So happy you enjoyed it, Derek, and thank you for taking the trouble to comment. Please stay safe.

      Reply
  4. Debbie Lee says

    July 16, 2020 at 10:51 am

    How well the Victorian virus resonates with the readers currently. Anyway, it’s a succinct but witty story with a clever ending.

    Reply
    • Steve says

      July 16, 2020 at 7:57 pm

      Thank you for your kind and positive comments Debbie. I’m really very grateful for your feedback. Please stay safe.

      Reply
  5. Justyna says

    July 16, 2020 at 7:20 pm

    Good start, I’m curious enough to want to read further. Along the lines of Sherlock Holmes, Agatha Christie?

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    • Steve says

      July 16, 2020 at 8:01 pm

      Thank you for your kind feedback, Justyna. Much appreciated. Yes, I went for something topical, the virus, based it in my home city, London, and within one of my favourite genres, the private detective. Please stay safe.

      Reply

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