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Lotion

July 14, 2020 3 Comments

Lotion

By Linda McMullen

As an eighteen-year-old in the New American Republic, I had complete freedom to marry the diseased thirty-nine-year-old sybarite who selected me to bear his children. After the service, Anna adjusted my stainless veil, slipped me a rigid tube of opalescent, medicinal gel. Contraband.

“How—”

“My friend Mary. Canada. Read the instructions…beforehand.”

“I—”

Jacob conveyed me to the antique B&B, mauled my zipper…I pantomimed tooth-brushing. He acquiesced.

I deciphered minuscule print: “Monitum venereus. Indications immediate.”

I coated my palms. Returned. Submitted. Jacob sprang. I touched. A neon alert spread upon him…His horror.

My pelting footsteps receded into the night.

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  1. CONSTANÉE MALIK HEMEDI says

    July 14, 2020 at 10:14 am

    At first I saw similarities with “A Handmaid’s Tale” but then I got lost.

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  2. derekmcmillan1951 says

    July 14, 2020 at 10:22 am

    This was novel and interesting. I thought the story was self-contained and sybarite isn’t a word I come across every day 🙂

    Reply
  3. Jim Woessner says

    July 14, 2020 at 9:27 pm

    This was great. One of the few that gave me an audible laugh out loud. My only worry is what happens to her hands?

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