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Love and Duty

December 27, 2016 6 Comments

Love and Duty

By Dianne Hendricks

“How long ’til the coroner gets here?” I asked the two uniformed men dispatched by the 911 operator.

“Coroner don’t work holidays, Ma’am,” said the taller one. “You touch anything?”

“Of course. Wouldn’t you touch your son, officer?”

“Looks like he was cookin’. Any mention of suicide?” asked the secondary, consulting his clipboard.

“He mentioned lots of things. Junkies do that.”

“No need to get snippy, Ma’am. We’re just doing our job.”

So were the psychiatrists, the nurses, and the rehab specialists. The man from the funeral home zipped him into a body bag and wheeled him away.

At last…finally alone…I shattered.

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  1. Dante Murray says

    December 27, 2016 at 9:30 am

    Sad and beautiful.

    Reply
  2. Thomas Minder says

    December 27, 2016 at 10:12 am

    Sad story, nicely written.

    Reply
  3. Joanna Bressler says

    December 27, 2016 at 11:09 am

    Good story. You were able to put me in her place, physically and emotionally, in so few words.

    Reply
  4. Robb Lanum says

    December 27, 2016 at 11:51 am

    Great work – very well done.

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  5. Bobby Warner says

    December 27, 2016 at 5:18 pm

    Very emotional and hard-hitting story, well-written, too.

    Reply
  6. Dianne Hendricks says

    December 27, 2016 at 7:10 pm

    Thanks so much, everyone. I so appreciate the supportive comments. Dianne

    Reply

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