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Loveless Love

September 8, 2017 4 Comments

Loveless Love

By Michael D. Brooks

Growing up, Edith felt homely, unwanted, unloved.

At seventeen, her stepfather taught her how to express her affections. After years of neglect, she finally felt loved. She told her mother of this love, but her mother admonished Edith for having a creative imagination and silently accepted her husband’s love for her daughter.

After graduation from college, Edith fell in love with men who loved her the way her stepfather had. She believed and accepted that their attentions and her reciprocations were what love was.

At eighty-two, she met a man who loved her the way all the other men should have.

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  1. Anita Bodle says

    September 8, 2017 at 9:45 am

    A beautiful piece of prose. My heart went out to Edith. She seems so real.

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    • Michael D. Brooks says

      September 17, 2017 at 12:27 am

      Thank you, Anita. Unfortunately, Edith is all too real.

      Reply
  2. Dianne Hendricks says

    September 8, 2017 at 2:39 pm

    Beautiful! Thanks for the day-brightener. I fear there are many Ediths among us.

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    • Michael D. Brooks says

      September 17, 2017 at 12:29 am

      Dianne, I am pleased you enjoyed it.

      Reply

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