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Love’s Old Dream

February 11, 2016 3 Comments

Love’s Old Dream

By A. Joseph Black

In truth, he’d never been handsome, and in our forty years together his looks certainly hadn’t improved. I stared at him now. Over time, in a sort of strange facial continental drift, his eyes and mouth had migrated to the edge of his face, as if fleeing at a glacial pace some terrible event that had occurred somewhere around his nose.

He could also be rude: intolerant, abrupt, occasionally profane. As for money, every pound was a prisoner. And his grammar was truly appalling.

He looked up and caught my eye.

“I love you, hon.” He smiled.

“I love you too.”

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    February 11, 2016 at 12:27 pm

    “…a sort of strange facial continental drift… Wow! Imagery just doesn’t get much better than this. Great job. A winner!!!

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  2. Tony Press says

    February 11, 2016 at 12:38 pm

    Sometimes it’s like that. Nice one.

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  3. Jeanne Althouse says

    February 13, 2016 at 4:09 pm

    A smile for this one. Checking to see where my eyes have migrated. ?

    Reply

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