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Lucy Learns Something New

April 8, 2024 4 Comments

By Roger Hayden

Lucy asks questions, barely pausing for breath, a small, dark-eyed child wanting to know more. Grey-haired Ambrose, ancient, an arm’s length away on the window seat, stays silent, hunched, immobile.

She turns yellowed scrapbook pages, pouring her enquiries out loud: “Who is this, who is that, what’s this, what’s that, what are they doing?”

Ambrose sits, head sunk on his chest, his feet on the many-coloured rug Lucy wove for him with her mum’s help.

Outside, the clouds clear. The sun illuminates the garden teeming with snowdrops and daffodils. Lucy looks up, reaches out to touch Ambrose, frightened by his silence.

“Grandad?”

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  1. Sue says

    April 10, 2024 at 9:26 am

    Lucy6 is definitely learning something new but not necessarily about photos. I wonder about her response. The ending is a bit unsettling and I like that. Leaves me wanting more.

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  2. Dan Graves says

    April 10, 2024 at 10:04 am

    has Ambrose died or is he just buried in thought?

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  3. julie turland says

    April 10, 2024 at 10:08 am

    Very good story

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  4. Pamela Cartlidge says

    April 11, 2024 at 4:08 am

    A gentle story contrasting young and old. Told tenderly it is endearing and evocative.

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