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Luna

January 2, 2017 9 Comments

Luna

By Subhankar Biswas

“My sweet Luna, as beautiful as the moon,” he sang. “My love, as constant as the tide.”

Parting her hands from her face, he’d kissed his shy bride.

A year later, she sits on a hospital bed, staring at a handheld mirror, recalling that first night.

Her lips quiver. The scars will heal, the doctors say, but the accident has left part of her face paralyzed.

She covers her face when he walks in.

“My sweet Luna,” he says, tenderly removing her hands. “Don’t you know the moon has scars on his face?”

But, just for a moment, his eyes flicker.

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  1. Dante Murray says

    January 2, 2017 at 9:03 am

    This could almost read like a prayer.

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  2. Georgina says

    January 2, 2017 at 9:13 am

    I liked the way the story was wrapped around the song.

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  3. Judith Kelly Quaempts says

    January 2, 2017 at 10:04 am

    Perfect small story with a perfect ending. Kudos to the author.

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  4. rogershipp says

    January 2, 2017 at 3:15 pm

    Well done… I especially liked the ending!

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  5. G Chandramohan says

    January 2, 2017 at 7:11 pm

    I liked the way moon is used to personify beauty

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  6. Kurea says

    January 2, 2017 at 7:50 pm

    It’s so tragically beautiful 🙁
    Love that ending.

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  7. Mal Lugton says

    January 3, 2017 at 10:44 am

    This is exactly how love should be!

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  8. Dipankar Biswas says

    January 3, 2017 at 11:41 am

    Touching and moving narrative. Couldn’t stop the lump forming in my throat ?.

    Reply
  9. Srimathi M says

    January 6, 2017 at 3:34 am

    Simple but a powerful message

    Reply

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