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Made to Order

June 5, 2023 19 Comments

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I stare at the screen, knowing I can’t afford everything on my wish list. I triple-check my choices, weighing options.

Fewer hobbies? I uncheck karate and singing, but keep painting, hiking, and reading.

How important are looks, really? Green eyes. A chiseled jaw. Above-average height. I can spring for that.

Advanced options: He needs to be smart. And kind. That is non-negotiable. But I can live with basic empathy, and romance is overrated anyway.

I reread the terms. Love isn’t guaranteed, but he’ll be programmed for commitment. It’s enough.

I sign the agreement and hit submit. Two weeks until delivery.

By Melanie Mulrooney

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  1. Amanda Le Rougetel says

    June 5, 2023 at 7:06 am

    I wonder what the return policy is…

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    • Rita Riebel Mitchell says

      June 6, 2023 at 5:11 am

      Lol

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  2. Thomas Nilsen says

    June 5, 2023 at 7:19 am

    Well written! Love it!

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  3. Nicki Nance says

    June 5, 2023 at 8:14 am

    Sign me up! Great read.

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  4. Cathy Cade says

    June 5, 2023 at 8:30 am

    There’s a thought. You’d have no-one to blame but yourself.
    Great idea.

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  5. Cathryn says

    June 5, 2023 at 10:31 am

    Hello Melanie,

    Great! Captured the character personality of the narrator. She might want to be careful, however, about what she wishes for!!

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  6. Rita Riebel Mitchell says

    June 6, 2023 at 5:12 am

    This is cute, Melanie, and well written. I enjoyed it.

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  7. Colette Parris says

    June 6, 2023 at 8:31 am

    Great piece! I was highly entertained.

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  8. Indra Raj Pathak says

    June 7, 2023 at 9:49 am

    Wonderful-someone is programmed for commitment. I am activated to applaud.

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  9. Ekta Garg says

    June 7, 2023 at 4:14 pm

    Maybe “Stepford husbands”? Great twist!

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  10. Melissa says

    June 7, 2023 at 5:30 pm

    This is a nice story. Slight misdirect in the beginning, slight bit of unease with this type of technology. Very well done!

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  11. Terra says

    June 7, 2023 at 9:11 pm

    Love this! Dystopian dating…

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  12. Toni Brayer says

    June 8, 2023 at 2:31 am

    Really good

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  13. Nina says

    June 8, 2023 at 7:29 pm

    This concept is so perfect for our day and age! Love that ending!!

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  14. Finnian Burnett says

    June 8, 2023 at 9:23 pm

    Absolutely love this delightful story. So timely and relevant.

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  15. Kristen says

    June 9, 2023 at 7:49 am

    Great stuff!

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  16. Melanie Mulrooney says

    June 9, 2023 at 2:20 pm

    Thank you all for reading and taking the time to comment. Much appreciated!

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  17. Ginny Gill says

    June 9, 2023 at 8:10 pm

    I love it! Yet, I’m not sure what is going on here? It’s got me thinking and I’m sure I’ll be thinking about it tomorrow too. Keep writing!

    Reply
  18. Sandra says

    June 12, 2023 at 7:45 pm

    I’d like to see the odds of a good turnout on something like this. Great idea!

    Thanks.

    Reply

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