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Making Bubbles

March 11, 2016 10 Comments

Making Bubbles

By Tom Hadrava

I’ll always remember the very first bubble; I held an apple in front of the bubble blower and blew a bubble around it. The bubble enveloped the fruit, floating with it; it swerved to one side, carried by the breeze: an unseen touch guiding it to someone’s hands.

Next, I sent a pen; a pin; reading glasses; tissue; a teabag; necessities: pieces of myself.

I never see them again but I know—somehow—they reach their destinations.

The mystery remains though: who sent the bubble blower itself? Arriving on my windowsill, it tapped against the glass, floating in a shimmering bubble.

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  1. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    March 11, 2016 at 9:07 am

    Magical.

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  2. Jennifer Freed says

    March 11, 2016 at 9:36 am

    I like this–the sense of mystery and wonder. Well done.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    March 11, 2016 at 9:40 am

    A very nice bit of surrealism and sheer fantasy. This is a GOOD one!

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  4. Scott Merrow says

    March 11, 2016 at 7:58 pm

    Maybe the ghost of Lawrence Welk sent the bubble blower.

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  5. writingmywayoutofdepression says

    March 12, 2016 at 5:01 am

    I found reading that calmed me. I suppose it was imagining the objects being encased in their bubbles and then floating off. Great piece.

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  6. Smila W Planete says

    March 12, 2016 at 7:41 am

    Yes, totally surreal, as B W stated. I felt like I was in a moving painting. I will be reading your story multiple times for sheer pleasure.

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  7. Kelly Evans says

    March 13, 2016 at 9:24 am

    What a wonderful story, thank you for sharing it!

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  8. Tom Hadrava says

    March 13, 2016 at 12:51 pm

    Thanks everyone for all the kind words and support! I will definitely send some more bubbles your way…:)

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    • Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

      March 17, 2016 at 5:10 am

      Tom, I saw your piece today at Daily SciFi. Brilliant work! Are you on Facebook or Twitter? You’ve got a fan, here, and I want to keep an eye out for your work.

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      • Tom Hadrava says

        May 2, 2016 at 11:25 pm

        Dear Lara! How lovely! Unfortunately, I don´t use any of the social media you mentioned…I am sorry. But thank you for your support. I will let you know about any news. Of Waves And Men, here at 101 words, is my most recent piece. Enjoy!

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