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Making Hay

August 25, 2017 12 Comments

Making Hay

By Susan Gale Wickes

It wasn’t the way I thought it would be. It wasn’t white organza and pink roses. There was no champagne toast, no throwing of the garter.

It was a borrowed blue dress and five minutes in front of the Justice of the Peace. It was a long ride down a dirt road to a farm in the middle of nowhere.

“Get that dress off,” he yelled hurriedly from the bottom of the stairs. “We’ve got work to do.”

“Hallelujah and Sunday morning!” I dropped the dress and hopped into bed just in time to hear the old 8N tractor fire up.

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  1. Gina Dowers says

    August 25, 2017 at 9:20 am

    Hilarious! That’s farm life young lady. Better get used to it. – Great job, Susan!

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    • Susan says

      August 25, 2017 at 10:25 am

      Thanks, Gina!

      Reply
  2. b. says

    August 25, 2017 at 11:35 am

    There are some painful memories associated with my farm life, but they have mostly faded. You have had the insight to poke fun in this example and you have succeeded in making me smile as some of my old memories. Thanks for a good story and well written.

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    • Susan says

      August 25, 2017 at 7:24 pm

      I’m glad this made you smile! Thanks, b.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    August 25, 2017 at 12:39 pm

    I’ll bet that old 8N tractor wasn’t the only thing that fired up! Good story.

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    • Susan says

      August 25, 2017 at 7:27 pm

      Could be…. Thanks, Bobby!

      Reply
  4. Dan says

    August 25, 2017 at 6:02 pm

    As a city boy, perhaps, I don’t quite understand the tractor reference at the end.

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    • Susan says

      August 25, 2017 at 7:37 pm

      It’s an old Ford tractor that was produced, I believe, from 1947-1952…and, in this story, it may have been the farmer’s true love. 🙂

      Reply
      • Dan says

        August 25, 2017 at 10:50 pm

        Ah! Of course! Excellent work…

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        • Susan says

          August 26, 2017 at 7:50 am

          Thanks, Dan!

          Reply
  5. Anita Bodle says

    August 27, 2017 at 11:38 am

    Absolutely love this!

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    • Susan says

      August 27, 2017 at 3:43 pm

      Thanks, Anita!

      Reply

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