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Manitou Cave

July 23, 2019 5 Comments

Manitou Cave

By Jim Doss

The first peoples wrote their words backwards on the cave walls to be read from the spirit world.

We can see the letters in the light of our campfire, black etchings on water-polished sandstone, as we swig our Budweisers, light a few joints: just old high school friends getting high. Girl-talk, crude jokes, tales of sexual escapades—the bragging goes on for hours until we pass out.

Then, angry spirits emerge from the darkness to confront our trespass, slit our throats, and suck the dying light from our eyes.

In the morning, none of us dare speak about what we dreamed.

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  1. David Berger says

    July 23, 2019 at 10:51 am

    Nice!

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  2. b. says

    July 23, 2019 at 1:04 pm

    Good writing to go along with a great imagination.

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  3. stella murovic says

    July 26, 2019 at 8:10 am

    Excellent – really loved it. keep on writing you creative person.

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  4. Lynda Kirby says

    July 27, 2019 at 7:15 am

    Great.

    Reply
  5. Dolores Johnson says

    July 27, 2019 at 7:08 pm

    Great writing!

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