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Maze of Confusion

January 1, 2019 4 Comments

Maze of Confusion

By Alan Barker

Easy Peasy. Halfway House. Complex.

“Which one do you fancy?” asks Julie.

Darren smirks. It is an easy call. Grabbing her hand, he strides towards the last sign and enters the maze. Inside, mirrors adorn the walls and lights flicker intermittently. Darren leads the way; Julie struggling to keep pace.

After many twists and turns, and not having seen a soul, Julie says, “Will we ever get to the end?”

“No sweat, babe.”

Presently, Darren stops for a breather.

“This place is a joke,” he grumbles. Looking in the mirror, he realizes he is all alone.

Then the lights go out.

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  1. b. says

    January 1, 2019 at 10:31 am

    Aha! You’ve painted a picture of real life with a few choice words. Thanks for a great read.

    Reply
    • Alan Barker says

      January 1, 2019 at 5:27 pm

      Many thanks. Glad you enjoyed it!

      Reply
  2. Iqbal Hussain says

    January 8, 2019 at 2:01 pm

    Anther fantastically chilling story in this week’s selection. I loved the ending. I didn’t see that coming!

    Reply
    • Alan Barker says

      January 12, 2019 at 6:51 am

      Thank you Iqbal. That’s really good to hear.

      Reply

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