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Measure4Pleasure

June 24, 2016 5 Comments

Measure4Pleasure

By Prospero Dae

“Sir, you are a fleshmonger, a fool, and a coward.”

“Do I know you?”

“I am merely enquiring about the whereabouts of my wife.”

“You’re a nutjob…”

“My apologies. I’ll try the next floor.”

For those who feel somewhat lost, we are in the gold-hued, lantern-lighted corridors of the Hilbert Hotel, now on the 1000th floor, where our hero is methodically seeking his wife. There he has a pleasant encounter with a chambermaid, whom he realizes is the love of his life–and after symphonic intromissions on a goosedown bed, he dusts himself off, regains the stairwell, and continues the search.

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  1. Cynthia Jobin says

    June 24, 2016 at 9:34 am

    A Restoration Comedy in a nutshell.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    June 24, 2016 at 9:09 am

    It’s always good to take a quick goosedown bed break while searching for an errant spouse. This one I really dig, Prospero!

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  3. Susanne says

    June 24, 2016 at 10:44 am

    Ah. Love’s labour’s lost. You are a funny man, Mr. Dae and this is a funny story.

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  4. b. says

    June 24, 2016 at 11:10 am

    Ah yes, one must be refreshed when duty calls. I shall call upon your very words should I have a need to seek my spouse. Good story!

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  5. dimitriosotis says

    June 24, 2016 at 7:34 pm

    interesting, to be sure…

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