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Melodies of Fear

June 1, 2016 5 Comments

Melodies of Fear

By Amoeba

Although I could no longer hear the melodies of fear in the incessant pleading, I knew they were there. The pain etched in his half-submerged eyes told of desperate cries—silent pleas.

My father, who worked disposal duty in the city’s abattoirs, had once said to me, “Spend so long in a place that smells so unimaginably foul, and you don’t even notice it.”

It appeared that the same was true of sound.

I watched his pained face rise and then fall beneath the black water with amused satisfaction, checking once more that the ropes that bound him were tight enough.

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  1. William Gilmer says

    June 1, 2016 at 10:02 am

    Gut punch of a story, well done.

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  2. Bobby Warner says

    June 1, 2016 at 10:33 am

    Nice, unexpected, gruesome ending. Loved it!

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  3. Luann says

    June 1, 2016 at 10:34 am

    Wow!

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  4. Tom Hadrava says

    June 1, 2016 at 2:12 pm

    Well done, I love it!

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  5. Ann Toerner-Rich says

    June 2, 2016 at 9:08 am

    Well written, but sick.

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