
By Amoeba
Although I could no longer hear the melodies of fear in the incessant pleading, I knew they were there. The pain etched in his half-submerged eyes told of desperate cries—silent pleas.
My father, who worked disposal duty in the city’s abattoirs, had once said to me, “Spend so long in a place that smells so unimaginably foul, and you don’t even notice it.”
It appeared that the same was true of sound.
I watched his pained face rise and then fall beneath the black water with amused satisfaction, checking once more that the ropes that bound him were tight enough.
Gut punch of a story, well done.
Nice, unexpected, gruesome ending. Loved it!
Wow!
Well done, I love it!
Well written, but sick.