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Memories

April 23, 2015 6 Comments

Memories

By B.E. Seidl

Oh, how she danced!

A stream of air tickled her like a feather as her feet lifted off the ground. With every pirouette, her arms opened and closed just as a swallow innately beats its wings. Her heart was in tune with the sound of the violin, effortlessly responding to the vibrations of the well-known melody. Like always, each pas composé was perfectly paced.

As she prepared herself for the grande finale, she was so absorbed in the song that she didn’t notice the nurse who was carefully bathing her with a sponge, the water trickling past her bedsores like tears.

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  1. janewhite10516 says

    April 23, 2015 at 6:12 am

    This is lovely and heartrending…

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  2. Firdaus Parvez says

    April 23, 2015 at 8:44 am

    Heartbreaking! Loved it!

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  3. B.E.Seidl (@BESeidl) says

    April 23, 2015 at 3:11 pm

    Thank you for your kind comments, they are much appreciated!

    Reply
  4. Lois says

    April 24, 2015 at 5:25 am

    Beautiful in its empathy and sensitivity.

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  5. bunmioke says

    April 25, 2015 at 10:21 pm

    A fine piece with an even more poignant ending.

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  6. Cassandra Lane Rich says

    May 9, 2015 at 1:20 pm

    Gorgeous!

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