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Metamorphic Murk

September 21, 2025 1 Comment

By Katie Hemmerlin

I can feel their eyes tracking every movement, each limb, as I cross their bog; a passage formed from ancient metamorphic rock, each stone spaced just beyond a stride. The rules are simple: they can’t touch the stones, and no mortal or mortal object may touch their water.

I finger the key tethered around my neck. The key to my salvation. One final gate to unseal.

A detritus-laden, slithering limb bursts from the murky depths, and I spring from the safety of crumbling schist. Slime coats my front, but I’m still able to land—barely.

Then I hear a faint plop.

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  1. Jo Gatenby says

    September 24, 2025 at 4:23 pm

    Yikes! Let’s hope the PLOP was that limb… but me thinks the MC better get running! Not sure where this was supposed to be, but I found myself thinking it was a video game, LOL.

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