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Mind Gesture

February 28, 2016 6 Comments

Mind Gesture

By Rachel Khosrowshahi

I’m not that kind of fortune-teller, but I don’t say that at first. Okay, maybe I’m not explaining it right. I just read what they write. It’s in the letters. Like the actual words. You see, handwriting is a gesture of the mind. At first I did it with doodles and stuff. Then I figured out I could do it with handwriting too. Want to see one? See how the letters curve like the bottom of a boat? He drowned over the summer. No, I’ve never tried mine. I don’t write unless absolutely necessary. Even then it’s usually just a signature.

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  1. Laura Lovic-Lindsay says

    February 28, 2016 at 9:13 am

    Concept really grabbed me hard. Love to see this in a longer piece. I’d totally read that.

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  2. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    February 28, 2016 at 12:14 pm

    Interesting story. Written well. Good work.

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  3. Scott Merrow says

    February 28, 2016 at 1:53 pm

    Great idea. Nice little story. Very well written. I agree with Laura (above) — I’d love to read a longer version of this.

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  4. Bobby Warner says

    February 29, 2016 at 11:32 am

    This is an old idea (if I could somehow see my own future, would I want to?) done up in a clever way. I agree that it would make a good longer story.

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  5. Smila W. Planete says

    February 29, 2016 at 1:49 pm

    a kind of retro piece. Nowadays we’d have to analyze the choice of font.
    But I really like how even the shape of writing can be an extension of the subject, as though the subconscious could reveal itself through the image of the word. A bit like psychoanalysis and the talking cure, except that this translates fate. I like how the fortune-teller circumvents his own fate!

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  6. John La Briola says

    April 4, 2016 at 9:41 am

    Fantastic piece! I must’ve missed this when it first ran — so glad I had a chance to read it today with all the other selected stories. I look forward to more.

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