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Mint Julep Kisses

February 2, 2016 2 Comments

Mint Julep Kisses

By Cath Barton

I was waiting for Geoff when the woman sauntered towards me. Red lips, red shoes, a seductive curve from one to the other. By the time Geoff came out of the store I’d turned her way.

“Buy me a mint julep,” she said. I only noticed her lips, the way she pouted. The words could have been anything.

I don’t usually drink shorts, but sipping her lips the bourbon seduced me. Next thing she wanted diamonds. I was in no position to deny her.

Geoff called next morning. He knew the score.

“Trust me,” he said. “Stick to beer next time.”

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  1. Lisa M. Scuderi-Burkimsher says

    February 2, 2016 at 10:27 am

    A short micro story with a point. Nice ending.

    Reply
    • Cath Barton says

      February 2, 2016 at 10:32 am

      Thank you Lisa!

      Reply

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