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Missteps

September 12, 2017 3 Comments

Missteps

By Spencer Babcock

I feel the sharp mahogany stab my hip bone, wince at the sharp sting of freshly torn flesh; I hear the echo of wood and bone, feel the pain arise at the intersection of man and man-made. My bags, too heavy from the years of memories packed inside, push me back, trap me in the house I’m trying to escape. I wait and listen for the crinkling of the sheets, for the friction of the fabric signaling the intrusion you are about to make.

Instead, I hear only deafening, disappointing silence. You do not wake. And I, I do not stay.

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  1. bkmarcus says

    September 12, 2017 at 9:36 am

    Lovely.

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  2. Anita Bodle says

    September 12, 2017 at 4:43 pm

    Your story shows so much feeling. Beautiful.

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  3. Bobby Warner says

    September 13, 2017 at 11:59 pm

    Power full story. Great job.

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