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Missy

March 30, 2017 8 Comments

Missy

By Guy S. Ricketts

From the day I brought her home, I treated her wrong. This abandoned tabby, named Miss Kitty by previous owners, was renamed Missy; I refused to call her ‘Miss Kitty,’ even privately.

I worked two jobs, often leaving Missy alone to keep herself company. When home, I sometimes forgot to give her fresh water. I managed to feed her regularly.

Today, my shovel pats down the dirt on her shallow grave. Missy deserves a better burial. I’m losing my home, and need to move soon to stay with a sympathetic friend. I wonder how the new homeowners will treat her gravesite?

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    March 30, 2017 at 6:53 am

    Bittersweet and oh so touching. Loved it.

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    • guysr says

      March 30, 2017 at 9:00 pm

      Thank you so much, Bobby.

      Reply
  2. Max Puber says

    March 30, 2017 at 11:44 am

    I don’t feel sympathy for this guy. Should I? Can complex feelings be resolved or need they stay in superposition like Schroedinger’s cat?

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    • guysr says

      March 30, 2017 at 8:59 pm

      The sympathy is mostly for Missy, a victim of unfortunate circumstances. Not as much for the narrator. There is more a “I totally disagree with what you did, but in some way I understand how it might happen” sort of thing intended with the guy. It’s now much too late for Missy, and too late for the guy. He was thoughtless and negligent, an innocent creature paid for it, and now it cannot be undone.

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  3. George Mutch says

    March 31, 2017 at 1:30 pm

    A complete tale. Moral ambiguity and unsure whether to be sympathetic towards the lead. I liked it!

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    • guysr says

      April 12, 2017 at 11:08 am

      Thank you so much, George!

      Reply
  4. curtisa5 says

    April 7, 2017 at 10:49 pm

    Well done, you! My heart broke for poor Missy. (How could he not see what a great cat she was while she was alive?)

    Reply
    • guysr says

      April 12, 2017 at 11:08 am

      Thank you very much.

      Reply

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