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Mom

September 23, 2019 12 Comments

Mom

By Brooke Parry

When I was nine, I filled my room with things from the woods. Owl feathers, raccoon skulls, river rocks. I charged twenty-five cents to see them.

Dirt followed me through the house, and spider mites, too. Mom rolled her eyes and swept the tile. She combed the twigs from my rat’s-nest hair and pulled burrs from my clothes.

When I brought in a snakeskin, she backed against the far wall and said, “Don’t bring that in my house.”

But I was already up the stairs.

Every day, she tapped on my door, opened it, and slid a quarter into my palm.

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Comments

  1. Tom Stewart says

    September 23, 2019 at 8:04 am

    You have written a sweet, sweet story. Well done. Love the composition.

    Reply
    • Brooke says

      September 23, 2019 at 3:24 pm

      Thanks Tom! Glad you enjoyed it!

      Reply
  2. June Rogers says

    September 23, 2019 at 9:27 am

    Very touching story. Well written too!

    Reply
    • Brooke says

      September 23, 2019 at 3:24 pm

      Thank you June! 🙂

      Reply
  3. Patricia says

    September 23, 2019 at 9:32 am

    Good story filled with love3

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    • Brooke says

      September 23, 2019 at 3:25 pm

      Thanks Patricia! Glad you like it 🙂

      Reply
  4. Laura says

    September 23, 2019 at 10:29 am

    This is lovely ??

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    • Laura says

      September 23, 2019 at 10:31 am

      the ?? Was a clap hand emoji btw, didn’t translate through the software !

      Reply
      • Brooke says

        September 23, 2019 at 3:26 pm

        Haha thank you Laura, I appreciate it!

        Reply
  5. Pam says

    September 23, 2019 at 10:46 am

    Your story is wonderful, it warms my heart ??

    Reply
  6. Kar says

    September 23, 2019 at 11:35 am

    incredible!

    Reply
  7. John Adams says

    September 24, 2019 at 12:32 pm

    Very sweet. Great characters and SUPERB attention to detail!

    Reply

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