By Kerri McCourt
You shared your Halloween candy and always gave me extra.
We biked all day, wishing we could keep going.
We raced along the beach, trying to swim farther.
We giggled until our stomachs hurt, and still, we couldn’t stop.
We kept rebuilding, fixing our sandcastles after the ocean washed them away.
I wanted more for you, brother. You deserved better. Medicine wasn’t enough. Out of options, we travelled to the ends of the earth. I longed to go further. I am drained from crying, but the tears will not stop.
Just as you were shaping dreams, cancer swept them all aside.
Tragic tale of loss, told very well.
Beautiful, tragic story capturing a deep bond.
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