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Moved

December 8, 2015 5 Comments

Moved

By Wiebo Grobler

I watched the man on piano, eyes closed, swaying as his fingers flew across the keys. The lady on the cello, she was swinging, swaying. Another on the violin, rhythmic then jerky, like a puppet being pulled on a string.

“Why do they move so strangely when they play, Father?”

“Wood is stiff, son. But in the right hands, it comes alive. The wood transfers its feelings through the player. Joy, sadness, it all comes out. When musicians play, and I mean truly immerse themselves in the music, they become one with their instrument. And then my son, then they dance.”

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  1. Hannie Grobler says

    December 8, 2015 at 8:38 am

    Love Wiebo Groblers stories

    Reply
  2. Sue says

    December 8, 2015 at 11:10 am

    Mmm. Lovely.

    Reply
  3. Lukas Moolman. says

    December 8, 2015 at 9:41 pm

    Another great short story . Well done Wiebo Grobler.

    Reply
  4. Bobby Warner says

    December 10, 2015 at 2:44 pm

    A great comment on musicians and what they give to the world. Well, done!

    Reply
  5. Wiebo Grobler says

    January 18, 2016 at 12:38 pm

    Thank you for all the great comments. I really appreciate it!
    W.G.

    Reply

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