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Movie Night

November 15, 2017 5 Comments

Movie Night

By Trevor Pyle

We spent the afternoon in bed watching movies. The Yakuza with Robert Mitchum, Sunset Boulevard with Gloria Swanson—her eyes as feverish as a startled horse’s. Buried in blankets were plates dusted with crumbs and hardened squares of cheese.

Rita teased the blinds open.

“It’s dark,” she said.

I circled my arms around her.

“Time for another?” I asked. “Casablanca?”

She said, “OK. But it’s still two hundred an hour.”

I said, “Casablanca‘s short.”

Rita sat down on the bed. She slanted an imaginary fedora to a rakish angle.

She said, “Here’s looking at you, kid.”

Her Bogie wasn’t bad.

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  1. Bobby Warner says

    November 15, 2017 at 10:33 am

    Wonderful! Very, very well written…with great dialog. Great job, Trevor!

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    • David Silver says

      November 15, 2017 at 1:09 pm

      Fabulous.

      Reply
  2. Alyson Faye says

    November 17, 2017 at 12:17 pm

    love old movies and so was drawn to this one – love the twist and the sly humour

    Reply
  3. TTH says

    November 18, 2017 at 9:30 am

    I really liked this one. Sometimes movies are what you need.

    Reply
  4. Scott Dukette says

    December 7, 2017 at 3:43 pm

    Nice one!

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