By Jill Hand
The young woman stood in the empty house. They had hardly any furniture but it was all right; they were just starting out. The rooms would eventually fill with furniture and the house with children. There was a lot of work to be done first in order to make it a home. The windows needed curtains and the floors were bare. With a sigh, she started unpacking boxes.
The old woman stood in the empty house. The windows were curtainless and the floors were bare. The rooms were empty of everything but memories. With a sigh, she walked out the door.
Excellent story.
Love it ..
Yep. You nailed it.
Nice, very nice. Have you considered changing the order of the paragraphs?
Your story actually made me cry. Thank you. I adore it.
The cycle of life, told well. Good story.
Nice story. The circle completes…
I’m late in my reading. It’s so touching. Where is La Fortuna going? You can see this scene. It’s magical.