The clown shouldn’t be here. He’s standing in the aisle, tears cascading down his silly face. Saturday weather’s too nice for this. I think about asking him to leave but Rach beats me to it.
“Go home please,” she says, touching his elbow.
He nods and produces a large handkerchief to blow his nose in. An usher turns him around, guiding him carefully toward the doors. He had his time with me and I had my time with him. No one’s fault. My bride and I exchange a look of relief before turning back to the priest.
“Old boyfriend,” I shrug.
great twist ending – leaves me concerned for Rach. top story.
Ah, thanks Nancy!
You nailed the landing!
Cheers Michael! Endings are hard! 🙂
Oh yes. Excellent set up and I agree with Michael. You did nail the landing. Nice work, J.W.!
Thanks Amanda – see my reply to Michael re. endings! 🙂
Oh. Good twist! Like it!
Who doesn’t love a good twist? Also, the number of incel men I’ve met who can’t understand why a woman wouldn’t want to go out with them still has me shaking my head in dismay. This was partly a (tiny) push back against that toxic culture.
Glad you enjoyed the story!
Thoroughly enjoyed this story. Loved the twist and everything leading up to it.
You’ve put a huge smile on my face after a very difficult week, Ruth. Thank you!
From the beginning to the end, this quirky tale kept me curious and giggling till my final guffaw. Great write!
Laughing is an underestimated healing tool. God knows we all need more laughter right now. Glad you enjoyed the story Jay and thanks for taking the time to reach out and say so.