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Mumsy’s Secret

December 12, 2020 8 Comments

By Deborah Burke Henderson

We four kids sat mesmerized, admiring your strength as you mastered the roiling waves with a crawl, confidently slicing through whitecaps.

The beach was our playpen for countless summers until we were teens and ventured out sailing or crabbing with friends. We ran up the quahog drive to the garage and cranked the three-legged Maytag, squeezing the ocean from our towels.

It wasn’t until we were grown that we discovered the truth about those morning swims. You went out just so far, knowing you could always touch bottom and thrust yourself forward with another compelling push.

We laughed for hours over that.

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  1. David Daniel says

    December 12, 2020 at 9:26 am

    I love the bittersweet nostalgia of this: Mumsy’s tender deceptions.

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  2. Lisa Zizzi says

    December 12, 2020 at 10:01 am

    Lovely memory of Mumsy who wanted to be a courageous mother.

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  3. Noelle says

    December 12, 2020 at 2:48 pm

    A beautiful memory! Thank you for sharing your mom with us!

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  4. Richard says

    December 12, 2020 at 5:13 pm

    Nice story. Reminds me of my summers on Otis Hill and down the Cape. I wish it was summer now.

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  5. Pamela says

    December 13, 2020 at 12:02 pm

    Excellent hundred word story that evokes so much about your mom. She was a brave spirit!

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  6. Susanne Farber says

    January 19, 2021 at 8:00 am

    A beautiful memory. How much we don’t understand until we are older and those spirited days are long gone.

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  7. Dud II says

    December 17, 2021 at 5:43 pm

    Miss you Ma!
    She had us fooled for years.. An excellent swimmer I yearned to be. Her devoted son.

    Reply
  8. Lee Atherton says

    December 21, 2021 at 11:55 am

    Precious!

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