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My Neighbors

December 19, 2024 9 Comments

By Sarah McNamara

My neighbors stood at the end of their driveway, watching my father pull my mother’s head out of the car window by her hair. I went to school with their only son, Cameron. He stood on the cracked pavement between them.

They watched as my mother struggled to release herself. As her hands grasped his hands. As her eyes welled up with tears, and her mouth searched for words.

They did nothing.

I cried to them for help, but they just stood there, silent and flat like a photograph. Like they were sitting on their living room couch, watching a movie.

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  1. LC says

    December 19, 2024 at 12:27 pm

    This broke my heart.

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  2. Howard Musk says

    December 20, 2024 at 7:36 pm

    A searing image and a searing indictment of society.

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  3. Tracie Adams says

    December 25, 2024 at 6:54 am

    Agreed, this is a searing indictment of our culture today. It’s very timely with the news of bystanders and even police watching a crazed illegal immigrant set a young woman on fire on a subway. Your story is horrifyingly relatable for many victims.

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  4. Michael W King says

    December 25, 2024 at 8:48 am

    I want to know more!

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  5. Lori Brookes says

    December 25, 2024 at 10:32 am

    Ugh. Unfortunately that happens a lot. Poignant story.

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  6. Ed Kratz says

    December 25, 2024 at 11:38 am

    Moving story of childhood horror. Great, factual telling of the story by the narrator makes it even worse.

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  7. PK says

    December 26, 2024 at 8:24 am

    Acutely observed and heartbreaking.

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  8. Sue D says

    December 26, 2024 at 3:41 pm

    “..silent and flat like a photograph..”
    Oh, this is good…observed indifference.
    Well done and so true an experience for many people.

    Reply
  9. jaxson-dan says

    January 14, 2025 at 2:21 am

    inside I’m screaming, “at least call 911!”

    Reply

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