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My Refugee

February 3, 2016 10 Comments

My Refugee

By John La Briola

There’s always a young, pretty Romanian outside Skärmarbrink station, sitting on an overturned plastic crate. Baby photos. Paper Cup.

Days I’m light I smile. Better’n nothing.

So many invisible souls, every corner, every day. Pick one I figure. One. And make her yours.

I bring empty aluminum cans. Out-of-date bread. She shakes my hand ’til my arm’s ready to detach.

Collected dog-eared paperbacks yesterday. DVDs. Made an alluring cardboard sign: EVERYTHING 10 KRONOR.

Today she had an ugly shiner. Fat lip. Wouldn’t look me in the eye.

Maybe she got robbed. More likely: her husband wants to get back to basics.

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  1. Carinna Botelho Howard says

    February 3, 2016 at 8:35 am

    Excellent story! Powerful and sad.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      February 3, 2016 at 12:38 pm

      THANKS Carinna.

      Reply
  2. Tony Press says

    February 3, 2016 at 9:05 am

    Damn. Didn’t want it to turn out like that, but sometimes that’s the script. Good one.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      February 3, 2016 at 12:49 pm

      I appreciate you taking time to comment, Tony.

      Reply
  3. Bobby Warner says

    February 3, 2016 at 9:51 am

    Very gritty and true-to-life, John. A winner.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      February 3, 2016 at 12:52 pm

      Thank you for your kind words, Bobby.

      Reply
  4. Dawn Youlldoitandlikeit T. says

    February 3, 2016 at 8:12 pm

    Good one, John. Glad you’ve found an outlet.

    Reply
  5. John La Briola says

    February 4, 2016 at 12:35 am

    Outlets are good, Dawn. Thanks. Knockin’ out a few of these every week, feels good to see my words in print again.

    Reply
  6. robin glade says

    March 25, 2016 at 8:52 am

    this is my favorite so far. to the bone sad and seen.

    Reply
    • John La Briola says

      April 7, 2016 at 3:02 am

      Blades! Thank you sister!

      Reply

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